Jersey unveiling 6/12/18 9:30am

Discussion in 'Philadelphia Wings Forum' started by Hollywood42, Jun 6, 2018.

  1. MILLwasbetter

    MILLwasbetter Active Member

    I brought this to the Wings attention via twitter and the article has since been rewritten.
    https://wingslax.com/media/official-home-jersey/
    Good to know they're listening. The "Us here" was just brutal, and they did it twice. Not a good first impression on an article that a casual person is more likely to read since it was regarding the jersey reveal.
     
  2. AmericanRockFan

    AmericanRockFan Well-Known Member

    Did you tell them "Us here at the WingsZone message board think "us here" isn't the most professional sounding thing in a press release, and us here would appreciate your removal of "us here""?
     
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  3. MILLwasbetter

    MILLwasbetter Active Member

    haha I gave them an "Us here at the Philadelphia Wings need to proof read what the interns write up, because this might be the most poorly written article a professional sports franchise has ever released."

    That article also had an "us here at the Philadelphia Wings cant wait to show off what we got" as well as

    "us here at the wings are excited to announce out partnership with Inspira", I'm sure the people at Inspira were pumped reading.
     

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